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Dead Girl

by Little Dot

Dot marked her 3000th posting on The Archers message board with this "police procedural"

police montageIt was a cold day in late February and Alice Aldridge was returning from a long hack through the fields and byways of Borsetshire. She was tired and hungry and eager to get home to a warm Aga and hot drink and when it came to choosing between the long ride 'round the roads or a short walk, leading Chandler, through Leaders Wood she chose the latter option. The day had been a dull one. The freezing fog she had woken up to had still not lifted completely and the weak sunlight didn't reach the edges of the wood. Peering into the interior Alice could distinguish no colours, but she knew the place well, and grasping Chandler's reins tightly over her shoulder she led the way into the wood.

The narrow path was carpeted with several year's worth of dead leaves which stuck to Alice's boots. Her and Chandler's footsteps were the only sound and she began to feel apprehensive, the silence and gloom pressing in around her. She quickened her step wanting to get back into the relative brightness as soon as possible, but suddenly the reins went taught in her hand. Behind her Chandler had stopped. Alice turned to him, saw his ears were pricked, nostrils flairing, his brown eyes were focussed on a point over her right shoulder and turning back and staring through the dimness she could make out a shape lying across the path. Warily Alice walked towards it. Something inside her made her scared to look, as though she already knew what was lying there.

Alice felt very afraid, but she walked steadily forward, eyes fixed on the shape. She was within five paces before she knew for sure that it was a body, but by then she couldn't stop. Reaching it Alice stood for a moment, swaying, staring down into Debbie's sightless staring eyes. She felt her blood turn to ice and heard a scream that seemed to come from outside her body.

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"Nasty business, sir," the uniformed constable said to his superior as the two turned away from an examination of the scene. Detective Inspector Andrew North nodded mutely, wondering if the young PC really meant what he said, or if he'd seen one too many crime dramas. It was a stock phrase, but this really was a bad business, North thought, an attractive young woman found murdered, for it was murder, the marks on her neck were quite conclusive in North's mind, though officially he would wait for the postmortem, the body discovered by her teenage sister: the child had been hysterical when he'd seen her, a village full of her extended family, and they'd be demanding quick results; it was an added pressure that North could do without.

"Let the doc know he can take the body away, Goddard" North said grimly. "Let's see what he can tell us. And I hope it's something useful," He added as an afterthought. He watched as the forensics team zipped the corpse into a body bag and took it off towards the ambulance.

"What now, sir?" PC Martin Goddard was walking back towards him. North checked his watch. The gunmetal grey Tag Heuer showed quarter to six, almost completely dark now.
"I think that's all we can do here for now," North said grudgingly and began to pick his way back out of the wood to where they'd parked. "Get the lads at the station to find you a list of all the residents... electoral role, or whatever," he waved his hand vaguely, "and as good a map of the village as they can, and pick me up tomorrow at 08:00. We should have the PM report by then."
"Can I take the patrol car home, then?" Goddard asked. North raised one eyebrow at him and smiled, not unkindly.
"Yeah, just don't forget to pick me up," he turned towards his own car, "And, Goddard,"
"Yes, sir?"
"Bring coffee."

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It was not North's custom, as he sat in his favourite battered leather armchair, in his Felpersham flat, to think about work, but tonight that was proving rather difficult. He walked to the stereo, ran his fingers along the rows of CDs, categorised and alphabetised, he'd often joked that his CDs were the only part of his life that he kept in order. He finally selected a Green Day album, cranked up the amp on the aging Nakamichi, topped up his glass of Laphroaig and settled back in his chair. There was something about this case he didn't like. He'd dealt with murders before, plenty of them. Not that Borsetshire was a hotbed of bloody crime, but over the years... he downed the last of the whisky.

At some point in the early hours he staggered through to the bedroom and fell asleep, fully clothed, on top of the bed. He slept fitfully, dreaming of the dead woman's face with its expression of terror.

Part Two, in which a prime suspect is established

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