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Title: My lunch hour

by david from Scotland | in writing, fiction

Characters
Dan
Bob
Nathan
Greg
Ned 1
Ned 2
Ned 3
Ned 4
Scene 1
[Characters Dan Bob Nathan Greg]
[Dan and Nathan in lead followed by Bob and Greg along a narrow muddy road]
Dan: come on, guys want to try this new way I found yesterday?
Greg: will it get us late?
Bob: not likely I was there
Scene 2
[Characters Dan Bob Nathan Greg Ned 1]
[Boys walking just as in last scene but stop suddenly at the sight of Ned 1 charging towards them]
Ned 1: [aggressively] oi prats
Dan: Charmin
Bob:[panicky] leave it, its not worth it
Ned 1: I'm not worth the hassle eh? Well lets see how you react from this!
[Nothing happens]
Bob: oh my god I think you killed Kenny!
[Ned 1 runs off but trips over a root waling into a log the boys laugh then walk on]
Scene 3
[Characters Dan Bob Greg Nathan Ned 1 Ned 2 Ned 3 Ned 4]
[Ned 1 Ned 2 Ned 3 and Ned 4 are setting fire to a tree and the boys are watching while behind Dan and Bob Nathan and Greg are having an argument]
Greg: guys we should go
[No one answers]
Bob: go closer?
[Without answering Dan moves forward cautiously]
Nathan: I got an idea but it's risky probably too risky for Greg
Greg: ok spit it
[They all huddle together and quickly Nathan tell them the plan as]
Scene 4
[Characters Dan Bob Greg Nathan]
[Boys are walking slowly and look unlikely to get back in time for the bell as the plan was going to be left till the next day Nathan muttering to himself is pulled away by Greg]
Greg: well we will never get back in time for the bell come on the way through the mud is faster
[Greg trips and falls face first into the mud Nathan kicks him and wanders back to the others who are laughing]
Nathan: remember the tortoise and the hare?!

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every lunch me and my freinds go for a walk on the school cross country track but soon lots of neds came setting fire to trees and thats basically it.

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